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    Eve Fan Art- First Sci Fi Painting- I'm Stuck.... NEED HELP!!!

    Ok so this is a gift for my brother who is a HUGE ''Eve Online" fan. I'm just not happy with this, I know the critique is gonna be harsh but I need it!! Thanks everyone!

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    Too busy if you ask me. Looks as if you took some screen caps of your ships and attempted to push them all into one frame with lasers going off here and there. Obviously things are not in the correct perspective, I believe 2 point perspective still holds even in space. Furthermore the hud is really bugging me, the ring meters which are taken straight from the game does not match the style of the other display. You might want to explore different camera angles, perhaps an outside shot of the ship as its attacking.

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    I like the inside of the cockpit look however, bad composition and perspective. I think 1 point perspective would work good with this one.

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    added a little more

    started adding more before i read the critiques, i wasnt sure if perspective mattered in space...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gragg View Post
    started adding more before i read the critiques, i wasnt sure if perspective mattered in space...
    Perspective matters always, if theres no horizon that's blatantly obvious, it's still where your eye line stands. So base your images off of your imaginary line which is where your eye is. Whether you do one, two, or three points of perspective in space, they will still be relative to where the eye line is.

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    It's a mess. There's too many things going on and it's all cut-and-paste, so it's not unified at all. You have points of max contrast all over the place. Just look up "space battle" on google images. There may be lasers and stuff blasting everywhere, but in all the good ones there's only one or two key value contrasts. Decide what the main action is and make everything else subordinate to that.

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    i tried to do some of the things Mr C said, see what you tihink

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