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    Let's see if I can do this! (Mild Nudity) - Feedback more than welcome!

    Hey there, everyone! Even though this is a fresh account, I've been lurking these forums for years. I've finally decided to start my very own sketchbook here at CA.
    I Hope you'll enjoy it as much as I've enjoyed other people's sketchbooks... I'm 23 years old and maybe, just maybe it's not too late to become a better artist

    I'll start off with some stuff, I doodled on my sketchbook during the year 2011, and a bit during this year. I wasn't very active back then. Haven't actually been very active this past year either, but hopefully I can change that!
    I did some of these sketches from reference and perhaps doodled something while watching other people's sketchbooks or some instructional videos, so I hope it doesn't matter if there are some coincidental artworks. I in no way want/intend to steal other people's work and ideas!

    And of course, comments and critique are more than welcome!

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    From my sketchbook:

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    Here's an old piece from 2007 I think. I did a little repainting and that's where I ended up.

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    Hey, welcome to CA, its good to see u posting your work in here, your enviro looks preety good and those hand studies are done well too, keep dem cming!

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    Did a little repainting on the snowy piece I showed eariler. Tell me what you think!

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    Nice start to your sketchbook. I think your snowy mountain paintover defintiely improves on the original, the extra snowy bank help to give a better sense of depth but I'd watch out for your foreground as it's blending in with your midground which will mess the viewers perception of scale.

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    Artful_Stool: Thanks a lot. Will try to keep 'em coming!

    Mooglesarelittle: Thank you, too. Yeah, I tend to have a little problem with environments and foregrounds. I'll just have to keep on practicing.

    Here's some new stuff, been a bit busy under the holidays.

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    Stuff from December 2012 and January 2013

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    Wow you seem very talented to me -

    especially like this!

    http://conceptart.org/forums/attachm...4&d=1356197042

    I hope you can keep working very hard. And keep posting regularly in 2013!

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    AlexTooth: Thanks, man! I'll try, hehe.


    Here's my own version of Snufkin, from Moomin.

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    Wow, a lot of improvement from 2012-13 keep it up man.

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    EduM: Thanks!

    Some hand studies and a couple of trucks
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    Some free hand perspective studies.

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    Few minutes of doodling in Painter.

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    your new vehicle and hand studies are great cavvie. keep up the goodness!

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    also, i really love your environments, you have a real flare for those.

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    crisimikiwiki: Thanks a lot, buddy!

    Here are some sketches from the past few days.

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    Wow, your environments and those perspective drawings! Keep working on the figures and soon you'll bring them up to the same standard. But you are improving with every page. I'm looking forward to seeing your progress.

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    bec': Thank you. Getting better with every stroke!

    My scanner is shitty :/

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    Aaaaaaaaalright!

    You have some pretty sweet designs going on here but one of the problems is that you lack the fundamentals.
    Watch our for your lines. You tend to draw over them again and again, which makes them look messy.
    Try to get the line you want with the first stroke. Seems to be hard at first but you can help yourself with drawing the line in the air (pencil not touching the paper) a few times before you actually draw the line.
    Another thing is that you should practice to see what's in front of you more accurate.
    For example the skull you drew a few posts before.
    The proportions are totally off and I assume that you drew it from reference photo.
    Taaaaaaaaaake your time to really see and analyze all the proportions that are in front of you, before actually drawing it.
    Instead of just copying photos, you can draw from life.
    Getting something three dimensional in front of you to your two dimensional canvas is a lot better then just copying from photos.

    But overall the stuff looks good. Just keep focusing on the fundamentals and keep pushing your designs!

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    Here's some recent stuff.

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    Studying the male upper body.

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    Did a little sketching, this time in PS

    ((THIS IS SOMEHOW NOT DISPLAYING THE PICTURE))

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    Did a little repainting on the snowy piece I showed eariler. Tell me what you think!


    I love this one! How do you come up with your compositions?

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    whoaaa!! those perspective looks awesome!! I'm liking that torso study too

    SKETCHBOOK
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    @ImageScribe - Hey thanks man! Can't really tell, hahah. I just started scribbling something. I guess I use the rule of thirds to make a picture a little more interesting.
    @PoringMaster - Thanks to you!

    Here's stuff from my sketchbook from the last two months. Also did 50 heads, some of them very loose though.
    And yes, there's a self-portrait too

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    Still got a long way to go...

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    Hand studies for this evening

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    Environment study - about 1h

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    Hmm good start. Definitely lots of potential here.

    The last enviroment is a big improvement, good stuff!

    Keep posting.

    Looking for Feedback! Please visit my sketchbook..



    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...=178181&page=8
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