I did this as a part of Fanart Friday (it's my loose version of the original Tolkien painting, which is why I chose the odd "invisibility" effect), where I try to make a quick-ish painting during that day, but this specific one has fundamental problems that I'd really want to work on (as well as things that I now see, like the pot perspective *shudder* and the form of the jaw that changed too much during painting).
Basically it just doesn't have the feeling of perspective or depth that I tried to do (that the head would be looming over) and I'm not exactly sure where's the problem. Is it the values, the colours, should I have exaggerated the head perspective more or is it the inconsistency of the floor perspective or just... all of the above making it not work? Did I accidentally stray too much from the sketch?
Obviously all other crits are more than welcome too.