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    Critique needed

    Hey guys, I would really appreciate some crits on this design. I like it but somehow feel unhappy with it and can't quite place why.
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    Try making the lips make more sense. You seem to be trying to give them enlarged human lips by simply increasing linear size, instead of thinking about the underlying tooth arches and thickness and structure of the soft tissue.

    There are small lapses in structure everywhere - the brow, the perspective of the nose, etc. But lips are the least convincing part.

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    Thanks, I really appreciate it. I think I may have focused a little too much on the render stage and forgot about form and function.

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