Critique for my project :D
Join the #1 Art Workshop - LevelUpJoin Premium Art Workshop

Results 1 to 3 of 3

Thread: Critique for my project :D

Hybrid View

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Nov 2012
    Posts
    3
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    Cow Critique for my project :D

    Hey
    I'm after any constructive critique for my university project.

    I'm working on a previous challenge from cghub :- http:///forum/showthread.php?t=10677

    And this is the paragraph I've decided to do:-
    Kingdom Branae: Sitting to the North West this kingdom escapes the worst of the bitter weather that freezes its neighbour but the climate is very wet and rainy most of the year round. The rain that falls here supplies the river basin with an almost constant supply. These people have clothes, structures and animals that can survive a boggy, misty terrain. They recognise no god but believe in spirits and as such have a great many talismans, amulets and trinkets that adorn almost all of their possessions and clothes.

    I hope I can get any suggestions off you as well.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  2. #2
    Join Date
    Oct 2010
    Location
    Cape Town, South Africa
    Posts
    2,710
    Thanks
    2,942
    Thanked 1,819 Times in 936 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    If you want us to look at your work, don't put up a link to another forum. Just make the effort to actually
    put the work in your thread here. Besides which, your link is broken.

    I suggest you use the attachment manager next time.

    Thanks.

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  3. #3
    Join Date
    Oct 2012
    Posts
    62
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 21 Times in 21 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    The story line is good but where is your work as it needs to be here in this thread for critiques!

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

Members who have read this thread: 0

There are no members to list at the moment.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •