Composition, Lighting, General Critique.
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    Composition, Lighting, General Critique.

    So here is a piece that I am working on currently. I figured that before I go too much further I would just ask you all if there is anything that need to be fixed or changed before I start detailing. As the title says, the main areas in question for me are the composition and the general lighting.

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    Thanks for the help,

    ~Lorenzo

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    You might want to do a double check of where your building is. The only thing holding it up is the tangent point in the back of the structure where it meets the lip of the crater. There's no support under the front end. I say this because the rest of the crater's lip clearly indicates that there isn't enough room for something that big to be sitting on it.

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