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    Any crits at all are appreciated, please feel free to be as harsh as you want. I'm at University atm and this is a project I'v been required to do - I'm here to learn and will appreciate any help you guys can give along the way...

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    I have a environment or two also, but having a few issues uploading them so will get round to it asap.

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    Interesting! For crits, I would say work on his face. At the moment it is very flat (2D) compared to his left arm and belly. Also, his loincloth cuts in where his right leg should be attached to his hip. Lastly his right arm looks too small, even for forced perspective.

    Edit: Actually, a few more points: I think there should be a bit more of that same hard light you have on his head hitting, or at least reflecting, on his loincloth. How you currently have the highlights on it makes it look like he just finished twirling around which feels incongruent with his current pose.

    Hope this helps!

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    Thanks very much, very helpful; makes these things stand out to me as I otherwise can't see them >.<

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