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    a lot of mistakes .... you better have enough time

    I know there's a lot of mistakes in this artwork .... I don't know them but I know there's something wrong .. so please if you spot any of them just tell me
    for now ignore the sketchy look ..... I already know this one

    good luck .... you will need it

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    Big improvement over the first pictures you submitted here, which I still remember. It's clear you have been studying.
    Post more.

    Good to see you on the forums.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Star Eater View Post
    Big improvement over the first pictures you submitted here, which I still remember. It's clear you have been studying.
    Post more.

    Good to see you on the forums.
    and I still remember your comments .. happy to see you again
    yes I did some study but not enough. I got a job as a programmer and since then struggling with time :@ ...

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    Quote Originally Posted by SadMonster View Post
    I know there's a lot of mistakes in this artwork .... I don't know them but I know there's something wrong ..
    for now ignore the sketchy look ..... I already know this one

    good luck .... you will need it
    wtf? aint you the one, thats ment to be spending time and effort?

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    Quote Originally Posted by sone_one View Post
    wtf? aint you the one, thats ment to be spending time and effort?
    haha yea sure .. and I will ... but writing a critique can be called "time and effort" too ...
    I'm just trying to encourage viewers

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    This looks like a sad version of the "portrait of dad" in another thread. Strangeness.

    The most blatant mistake is the ear. Placement, tilt and detail all need work.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Leonor View Post
    This looks like a sad version of the "portrait of dad" in another thread. Strangeness.

    The most blatant mistake is the ear. Placement, tilt and detail all need work.

    hmm this is a coincidence for sure .. and I completely agree with your comment about the ears but can you tell me more about the details you mean

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