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    -= Dungo/Aquila's Sketchbook =-

    Hey everybody .
    I'm a french beginner. I'm 16 years old, and my name is Thomas.
    Please, be nice with my english because i'm not bilingual .
    I began "painting" since march 2012.
    My deviant http://graph3dungo.deviantart.com/.

    Today i'm happy to open my sketchbook here.
    And to show you some paintings among the best, which i did during march -> november 2012.

    ENJOY !
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    Wait - March 2012? You're kidding me, right? O_O

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    In english because english forum,

    Great study in general !

    A little lack of structure sometime. Like in this last one, watch out for the Ellipses shapes. You can see there is a problem especially on the second from the left.
    Same for the faces, they are great, but i'm sure you can be more precise.

    Like in this one => http://conceptart.org/forums/attachm...1&d=1353342508

    Every parts of the face (the nose, the lips, the eyes, etc) are cool , well rendered, but they don't fit exactly together, more constructions line would fix that quickly, I annoy you with really little details here


    Pour 16 ans tu commence bien continue comme ca.

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    Olooriel:
    Thanks !
    Yes it's right !
    I'd got my tablet for my last birthday, and i'm born in march .
    But, i said that they're the best paintings of all.
    If you want to see others, you can see it here http://www.graphistes-world.com/forum/?showtopic=10433.
    It's a thread of my beginning.

    Orkimede:
    "In english because english forum" I'm agree, but it's to have more critics .

    "Great study in general ! " Thank you !

    "A little lack of structure sometime. Like in this last one, watch out for the Ellipses shapes. You can see there is a problem especially on the second from the left.
    Same for the faces, they are great, but i'm sure you can be more precise. "

    Thanks, i will don't the same error for the next time.

    "Like in this one => http://conceptart.org/forums/attachm...1&d=1353342508

    Every parts of the face (the nose, the lips, the eyes, etc) are cool , well rendered, but they don't fit exactly together, more constructions line would fix that quickly, I annoy you with really little details here "

    Oh yeah, taken a lot of pleasure to draw this one. Thank you.


    "Pour 16 ans tu commence bien continue comme ca. "
    Je ne sais pas si tu parle franais, ou si a sort tout droit du traducteur, mais merci toi. Enfin belgique tu dois quand mme parler franais...
    Mieux vaut commencer tt pour ne pas le regretter plus tard .

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    holy crap! great stuff! ive seen you in deviant art already great to see you here on ca, welcome and i hope to see alot of improvement in the coming months work hard! and practice what youre bad at.

    cheers

    my sketchbook! Drawing like a maniac!!

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    Destroy your weaknesses! theres nothing more to it! stop bitching grab that pencil and sketch Away!

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    lionheartGFX:
    Wow thank you so much !
    You've already seen me in deviant art...
    However, what i make isn't very well. I appreciate that you know me before CA.
    For the practice, i can draw only during my weekends (when i haven't homework).

    Thanks again.

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    These look like photo paintovers. Post some traditional stuff.

    You're here to learn, not to impress.

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    I did not paint directly on reference... I began with a sketch. For the sketch, i help me with landmarks of a grid for to be sure of proportions.
    For the colours, i used pipette because it's very difficult without. But it's right that i should do it without pipette.
    But I have never painted on the photo directly.

    I can't post traditional stuff of painting. But i can with pencil.
    I think that it could help me for the building of a portrait to draw it in the pencil.

    But really, i here just for improve myself and not for impress people.
    My works isn't to the level for this. And here a lot of people are more strong that me.

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    I really recommend *not* using the pipette, just consider it taboo and don't touch it at all, you'll learn so much more.

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    without pipette:


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    very nice start! your portraits look very nice! it looks like some of the proportions are slightly off, other than that great stuff!

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    Thank you

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    not digital:


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    Very nice works)) For the sake of learning, I'd recommend to forget about pipette and to paint more from life and imagination.

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    Still not sure if you're here to learn or try to impress; the quality of your work varies so much. Please post more trad stuff and work it up.

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