Please criticize these harshly. I especially need help with anatomy and shading. Feel free to repost these with your corrections in red. Also, many of my characters lose their expression and personality during rendering - any help with this would be greatly appreciated.

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Pan and Echo

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The Elven Prince

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Welcome Om

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Eperdument


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Dolceria

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Take Everything