I'm working on something that could be my first series of portfolio pictures right now (athough I'll probably decide that it's not good enough in the end, ekhm). I'd love to get some critique, and suggestions concerning the changes I should make. It's still a WIP, and hence it's not fully rendered, and rough in many places.

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Here is a close-up on the face which is already fairly rendered:
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And here sketches of the remaining characters from this set:
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Thanks for viewing!