I know Conceptart.org for a long time but this is the first time i'm posting and the reason why is because the user exphrasis threatened to burn my house and to burn my dog if i didn't post... (i kid, i kid ).
My goal with this thread is to post stuff regularly so i can know your opinions and critiques and get better everyday.
Heres some work to start:
Last edited by Peixoto; November 7th, 2012 at 10:41 PM.
Give this guy some crits !
He's a hard worker.
Can't wait to see your progress through this sketchbook mate.
The studies are cool !
My advice at the moment would be to work on design and shapes a bit. Even with a couple of colors/value there should already be an ease to read shapes. Right now your thumbnails have interesting moods, but they're still too similar. Careful not to fall into the same mistake than I did and end doing mostly mountains. Don't hesitate to make mistakes here, it's what a sketchbook is for. Mistakes are your best friends. And potatoes as well.
Good luck on this journey mate !
Practice makes perfect.
Passion and dedication cleanse the mind.
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You're right, i need to get loose and break shapes. They're too clean and simple. i will be back to bases and work only in B/W so i can focus on shapes. I will also try the alchemist, maybe it can give another perspective about the volumes and shapes.
Thanks for the feedback mate.
New Studies and sketches!
thanks, I will
really cool so far. I dig those tree drawings. keep it up!
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dude those enviro studies are really nice! those trees too, i always have [problems drawing fluid trees, anyways off to a great start! cant wait to see more
Help me improve!
Is always good to feel my friends support.
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Try to see the tree as arms, hands and fingers, thats what i dodude those enviro studies are really nice! those trees too, i always have [problems drawing fluid trees, anyways off to a great start! cant wait to see more
thanks for the comment, mate