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    Cow Telnia sketchbook

    Hi guys, im new at conceptart. org and im a student of concept art. i would like if you can give me some feedback at my works so i can improve my skills and get better. This one was made at school. Thanks for watching

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    I think it's pretty cool, try to use dodge in some areas to create more shadow mood

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    Hi!! Nice landscape picture!
    I am not good at environments but the clouds to the left seem a bit unatural
    Keep up the good work!!

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    Sweet! I like the painting

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    Nice one! The colors are good -two things though: 1. It's lacking depth. Remember things in the distance become lighter and less saturated. And smaller. Right now it looks like the distance between viewer->statues is no more than 50m and the ppl are as tall as the cliff on the side. Exaggerate more if you want the statues to look really majestic. (Check out Feng Zhu on Youtube, if you haven't already: http://www.youtube.com/user/FZDSCHOOL )
    2. It's lacking clear light/shadow. When you start, think about exactly where your light source is and how strong it is -here the lightest part of the sky is top-middle, but the highlights on the statues/ppl are top-left and according to the cliffs the sun must be half hidden by clouds.

    Please take a look at my Sketchbook! <- Comments are highly appreciated and returned C:
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    Thank you very much Heyriel for the feedback i need to pratice more landscapes. Next time i will pay attention on that.

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    Where's the recent stuff you've been doing?
    Keep posting please

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    Esquizofrenia

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    Hybrid Ideas

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    I really like the colors on your enviro pieces, hybrids designs looks pretty nice too.
    Interesting idea with Esquizofrenia - you may push a bit more folds on the guy front legs.

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