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    Hey guys, need crit on this monkey, so far. I'm ready to refine the line work and make it cleaner but for now I would love some input. Thank you

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    I really like the attitude, the feet look a little confusing, I'm not entirely sure if thats because there is no definition in the skirt, or if I'm just a little confused, but I can't tell which foot is closest me, and its a bit confusing.

    I do really like the attitude though, its quirky, cute but awesome, keep it up! I'm sure others will give more solid advice, I'm sorry I can't help that much! D:

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    Thank you very much sir. I have been able to get crit and its all relatively the same, messed up feet. I should still work out that under body before the clothing, also cloth and back shoulder. Thank you so much again for the help

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    Name:  monkeyjuliuscaesar.jpg
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Size:  310.8 KBTook some note on past crit, this is the underlay of the body before the clothing.

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    I'm all for monkey business, but not when the feet look like the actual man hands you used as reference.
    Google images is your friend - Use real monkey reference if you have to.

    Right now, it looks like a baby, with really defined calves, dressed up for Halloween and the feet is King Kong's hands.

    Viva Monkey Business

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    Thank you so much for your input Burrito, I will definitely be doing changes

    Last edited by DMTcat; November 5th, 2012 at 04:51 PM.
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