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    Girl in Bar- Continued

    Hi guys, I have posted before. I have been wanting to get some feed back on this one piece I did, and am interested in getting suggestions and crit on what I can do to improve. This work has been a long and ever changing journey, so I really would appreciate some wise words. Thanks so much.

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    It looks nice, but thats it. The composition makes my eyes squint to look at her, and her pose looks so unnatural and stiff it makes me feel like shes been placed in afterwards. The scene is well done, and I like the colours but I think shes kinda been, plonked into the scene.

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    as said above theres a color problem there, if every other object in the scene is colored by the lighting of the she probably should be as well.
    the pose doesnt fit wheres she is in the picture... and she doesnt have a shadow, it results in this floaty weirdness.

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