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    guild wars 2 adolescent char fanart general critique on whole thing?

    Critique on what I can improve or somethin! thanks

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    1. Proportion
    2. Gesture
    3. Anatomy

    Practice those 3 things and you should be good
    Later I will show you the mistakes

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    I think that was a bit too general Capt Surge . Please elaborate more even if you're going to show stuff later. I am a little annoyed at just such a short critique. I do those regularly, and I am NOT saying that there isn't problems with the things you listed but atleast be more constructive about it. Thanks!

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    A few thoughts:
    -You have the tail emerging from the lower back. Should really be following the spine.
    -Hands need A LOT of work. Use references if there is ever any doubt. Actually, you should always use references whenever possible to better inform your illustrations.
    -Gesture: I don't know what he's doing. Pelvic thrust? Power pelvic thrust? Have an action in mind, then a clear and strong gesture that communicates that action well.

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    I'll keep your tips in mind and dedicate my next studies in developing converying gestures and hands.

    lotsa,lotsa hands!!!!

    and hehe. POWER PELVIC THRUST. SUPER SAIYAN ARHGHRARH.

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    The arms needed to be fixed a bit and so did the legs. I fixed the origin of the tail as well. The pose does seem funny so I was messing around don't worry to much about it, good luck. ^_^

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