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    help please

    hello everyone i would like help with improving so i decided to post some work so i could get some good critique and advice Name:  Picture 6.jpg
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Size:  102.0 KB the colored picture is down in soft pastel with pastel pencils

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    thank you in advance for all your comments and advice, i truly do appreciate any help you guys give me

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    There are some anatomy problems here, but I like your linework. You can probably benefit a great deal from working with black ink, because your pictures are lacking in contrast.

    "..now, to unleash screaming temporal doom.."
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    Draw more these are pretty good, the best way to improve your drawing is to always draw, study from life and draw more. Your first drawing is the best out of the three. Try ink if you would like but I recommend getting more work in first, (I dislike ink so I am biased) Check out some loomis books.

    These drawings are very flat the black line around them flattens them and causes them to lose value.

    A Cartoonist is just a lazy Animator.
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