I figured I'd return the favor and comment on your sketchbook. I'd love to see how your art has been progressing over the passed month since your last update.
The work you have up seems good. It could use some work though. It would seem that with a bit more time put into each of your pieces they would get much better. I'd say make sure you continue to do your studies. they should help a lot with some of your issues, as they appear to be mostly with your construction.
I'm also going to advise you not to be afraid of adding more tone and value. your pieces seem to be a bit incomplete as you aren't really pushing the darkest darks, to make the highlights pop.
Don't be afraid to add dark. be confident and put down what you see. Your eyes aren't going to lie to you.
as art king above me said,
Fudge this AWESOME place!!!
My SKETCHBOOK: please critique! i can take it!
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Sanity is wasted on the boring.
I don't how the error at the bottom happen.
Last edited by karta tajba; December 17th, 2012 at 05:05 PM.
Pretty good start here. Definitely keep at it. Watch the "chicken-scratching" line work. It's better to draw confident but incorrect lines than to draw a lot messy lines. Keep doing this over and over again and your linework will become more accurate.
Keep it up!
Bridgman studies and Drawings from the Stl artist guild.