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    Anatomy critics request : morning zombie

    Hello ! It's a long time since my last post, I had to stop drawing for a few weeks and sadly got interrupt with the female explorer and the dragon. Now I have more time, I can go back to my infinished WIP but I wanted to try something less complicated before.

    So ! Here is a stylized drawing, fill with the feelings "what head I got after short nights" ! I'm not sure about all the anatomy part, so I request your eyes to help me do you think some part are odd ?

    There are no photography model, I take a look here and there and try to make a correct result, hope it's not too wrong !

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    Finally I found some lengh problems, and one of the mouse had the mustache too on the right... What about now ? Anyone ?



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    A little correction on my own... What do you think ?

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    Lol great concept and one I know all about! those mornings after the night before can be hell!

    one crit I would offer would be to bring her left arm (the sleeved one) up to the level of the other in the classic zombie pose and make sure the cloth drops from her wrist down.

    after that it should look pretty good!

    like it matey well done, and all the best with the next one.

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    I think perhaps the torso looks a little long? It seems like the shirt is actually long, but if you positioned the wrinkle a bit higher maybe?

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    Here the update : I cut a little the torso as suggested and I make a quick test with the second arm raised, but I think I loose the "not really awake" effect. I think I will let the second arm as it was and work for a more zombie-like position in an other proposal Maybe the "Lunch Time zombie" !

    What do you think ?

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    I'd keep the left arm down. Having both up that way is already a cliche zombie pose to begin with, so if the character's only doing the pose half-way, it makes it clearer as to what the joke is.

    ...But you already knew this.

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