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    Vinicam is offline Five percent inspiration and ninety five percent transpiration.
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    A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do

    Hi there... My name is Vinicius Camolesi. I'm 23 years old, almost 24, and started to think seriously of art about 2 and a half months ago. I'll show you all the stuff I'm been doing for that time. At least what is worth showing.. hehe
    Critiques are most than welcome!


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    Some random chick faces... Very bad...
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    Link from my moleskine, done with cool grey markers.
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    More on the next post


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    Vinicam is offline Five percent inspiration and ninety five percent transpiration.
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    Actually I tryed getting serious about art in the end of 2009, but it didn't work properly... I hope this time I get it right.

    This was me experimenting with markers, really bad results. I really need to get a tablet and start training to paint...
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    Vinicam is offline Five percent inspiration and ninety five percent transpiration.
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    This was pretty much what I have done last week.
    All from imagination, except the ones that have the PM and REF writen next to it. PM was posemaniacs and the other some random stock photo... I wasn't trying to make a good shadow with values, just to block in a way I could define the musculature.

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    Vinicam is offline Five percent inspiration and ninety five percent transpiration.
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    From now on, I will try to update this thread as much as possible. Hope you guys help me in that "quest'... Hehe.


    And finally... wooooooff... This is what I did today:
    Some random poses, all from imagination.
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    I can see some progress in the anatomy, poses and lines, but I don't really know how to continue the study I've been doing... Think I'll just stick with it for now.

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    Good start, at least it looks like you're drawing a lot. Some, not all and mainly on the guys, the torso is a bit short; it looks this they don't have a pelvis for the legs to attach to. Donn't blindly copy, but think about each part of the body and how they all fit together.

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    hey good start indeed! its nice to see how you are focusing on anatomy from the very beginning, its not perfect, but really good already.
    Keep working!
    cheers!
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    yeah good start but maybe you can incorporate more studies into your routine, anyways keep posting!

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    wow, you have a good eye for bodies in motion. The poses in your imagination drawings are convincing and have a good sense of balance/weight.
    I agree with Black Spot about the pelvis- something tends to be amiss in that region. But it's nothing that some drawing from references and a short read on anatomy wouldn't fix ^^
    I like your experiments with markers. I think it might be beneficial to your skills to try different techniques, even before getting a tablet. Maybe something that let's you block in shadow areas quickly.

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    Vinicam is offline Five percent inspiration and ninety five percent transpiration.
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    Noses, most from photos.
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    Random characters. I saw the pose of the girl in a photo.
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    This is my share for now, It's been a pretty busy week, so I didn't draw as much as I wanted.

    Quote Originally Posted by Black Spot View Post
    Good start, at least it looks like you're drawing a lot. Some, not all and mainly on the guys, the torso is a bit short; it looks this they don't have a pelvis for the legs to attach to. Donn't blindly copy, but think about each part of the body and how they all fit together.
    Thanks for the crit, I'll keep that in mind.


    Quote Originally Posted by EduardoGaray View Post
    hey good start indeed! its nice to see how you are focusing on anatomy from the very beginning, its not perfect, but really good already.
    Keep working!
    cheers!
    Thanks, dude.

    Quote Originally Posted by kevin_ View Post
    yeah good start but maybe you can incorporate more studies into your routine, anyways keep posting!
    Yeah, I really need more studies, but I don't know if I'm really progressin in other things... Would be good to have a teacher.

    Quote Originally Posted by kabewu View Post
    wow, you have a good eye for bodies in motion. The poses in your imagination drawings are convincing and have a good sense of balance/weight.
    I agree with Black Spot about the pelvis- something tends to be amiss in that region. But it's nothing that some drawing from references and a short read on anatomy wouldn't fix ^^
    I like your experiments with markers. I think it might be beneficial to your skills to try different techniques, even before getting a tablet. Maybe something that let's you block in shadow areas quickly.
    Hmmm...Markers let me block shadows quickly... Hehe! Thank's for the thoughts.

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    impressive start a lot of hard work is obviously going on here, i guess just keep doing what your doing do as many anatomy studies as u can to attack weak point like you diud with the m=noses, do life studies ect. You have good design sensibilities when it comes to your characters ect so keep that up.
    i think seeing your own progress is just a slow process as you look at your wor everyday but if you keep the work rate up you will be able to look back in a few months as=n see the progress, just dont except it to be mega fast too quick but it happens just from the act of drawing constantly so i have learned

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    Seriously cool stuff being posted. Keep it up and make sure to do some drawing every day.

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    Hi vinicam, I must say, good work!! I did notice many incoherences in anatomy, sometimes in faces and some times arms/legs/ etc. If I were you I would start reading some anatomy books. There are good ones for anatomy drawing for artists. Be sure to check your local library!! I see potential but as Andrew Loomis says: No matter how great your talent, talent has to work with kowledge to do anything well.

    I think that is some of the best advice there is at this stage (which I'm currently also in).

    I'll be passing by again soon, be sure to check my sb !!

    Cya around!
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    Much better. Keep on improving.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ja1307 View Post
    impressive start a lot of hard work is obviously going on here, i guess just keep doing what your doing do as many anatomy studies as u can to attack weak point like you diud with the m=noses, do life studies ect. You have good design sensibilities when it comes to your characters ect so keep that up.
    i think seeing your own progress is just a slow process as you look at your wor everyday but if you keep the work rate up you will be able to look back in a few months as=n see the progress, just dont except it to be mega fast too quick but it happens just from the act of drawing constantly so i have learned
    Yeah, it's a slow process and sometimes(like this week) I can't draw as much as I wanted, but I can't get sad about it... Thanks for the comment.
    Quote Originally Posted by Old Ben Kenobi View Post
    Seriously cool stuff being posted. Keep it up and make sure to do some drawing every day.
    I'm trying do draw as much as I can each day, but this week was too busy...

    Quote Originally Posted by Dave'sWarmInsides View Post
    Hi vinicam, I must say, good work!! I did notice many incoherences in anatomy, sometimes in faces and some times arms/legs/ etc. If I were you I would start reading some anatomy books. There are good ones for anatomy drawing for artists. Be sure to check your local library!! I see potential but as Andrew Loomis says: No matter how great your talent, talent has to work with kowledge to do anything well.

    I think that is some of the best advice there is at this stage (which I'm currently also in).

    I'll be passing by again soon, be sure to check my sb !!

    Cya around!
    I can notice it too, everytime I draw a little better than before I can see all the flaws in the past drawings, but sometimes I just stop trying to correct something and go do the next.

    Quote Originally Posted by Black Spot View Post
    Much better. Keep on improving.
    Thanks for the support.


    Ok, this week works(most of today):

    - Tried to do at least a study a day, but didn't come as planed...
    - And a "fineshed sketch" I did today... Maybe will paint this subject someday, when I learn how to paint... lol

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    I realized something... I really don't know how to copy something. You can see at my drawings, whenever I try to copy something straight from reference, it came like shit and all out of proportions. But when I just use the photo as a reference and do my version it come alot better, you can clearly define wich is wich in this post.

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    Eai xará hehe

    Good start man! Its nice to see you focusing in anatomy. Don't forget color too
    Keep improving!

    see ya

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