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    Paper, Ink and lot of fun (Feedback Please)

    Hi!
    I'm new over here, i hope to post my sketches to improve as i get feedback. I'm just finishing my graphic design degree, but i realize that illustration it is the path I want to follow.

    I will appreciate your comments and critiques.

    (Sorry for my poor English, another thing i'm trying to improve.)

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    Hey, welcome and good start. I like your style. Keep up the good work.

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    I like it. Clearly cartoon style, but some of your characters looks pretty authentic, they got "these something"

    Before uploading you may lower the brightness, or contrast level of your pics. Just a bit to make it easier to read.

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    New bunch of drawings

    I did started the 30 day challengue and i had been working over a couple of fan art for a music bands.


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    This was done for an art group challenge in my country. The theme: Horror. A more interested in fantasy/tale topics related to the horror. So...

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    Another one for a group in facebook. Giants theme.

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    These are fun. You have a great style. The one with the guy running off with a monster head and being chased caught my eye in particular. They look like monstrous Muppets.

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    Thanks, had not noticed the similarity to the muppets until now hahaha

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    Thanks!

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    Trying to practice values...failed. 20 min

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    Value practice with photo reference.

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    This was my first post. I have to fix that skecthbook icon, i'm just reuploading of some old works. maybe 6 months ago

    Below some ink sketchs, some are a little bit blurry, cause my scanner doesn't work...and my cam isn't the best.
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    Whoa, really fun stuff. The giants / muppets one is freaking great. You're gonna be awesome if you keep it up. Post more!

    I'm a graphic designer too, btw.

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    Thanks Diamandis! I'll try post more often. Most of my practices now are in paper, and my scanner for some reason doesn't love me anymore.

    30 min practice..i'm trying to improve my characters, but always i end up doing a scene...i do like situations, not just poses i guess so.


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    30 SpeedPaint Group on Facebook.. White Forest...
    I didn't have enough time to paint a proportioned kid...e_e

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    Material and Light study

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    Heya, nice sketchbook.
    Your ideas and narratives within your designs are strong. It's matter of honing those fundamental skills to best illustrate your ideas that will take everything to the next level. I recommend trying a few studies from life, especially since it looks like you enjoy painting scenes. Keep it up!

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    Thanks for the advice Braydan, in fact the last one was from life, but i know what you mean, and yeah sometimes i draw outdoors when i have the time, but i usually dont pain from life. Maybe i could do that.

    I got my scanner fixed! =D

    Here are random pages from my sketchbook from last weeks.

    I was inspired by rachmakninof life, that's why there is some pianist drawings,in the other hand i'm trying a new approach to anatomy, as you can see in the last images.


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    This holydays i'm trying to be more productive. =)

    Most are anatomy and composition studies, and other stuff. 1/2

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    Hard study on anatomy, trying to go little further with the canon. 2/2

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    Iv been feeling like i hate the ways my drawings are communicating things, or maybe i feel like im stuck in the same style.. Anyway im trying to explore new compositions and ideas,maybe in a very conservative way, ill try to push that further the next time.

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    im deciding if i leave the fishes or i have to replace them for shark whales.

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    I love your style! I especially liked the graveyard piece. I have a special love for pieces like that, they remind me of something you would put on a upper middle grade cover, like Percy Jackson.

    I don't know if you want crit or not, and I'm still very much a beginner so grain of salt, but it seems like your pictures seem to lean to the side, like you're tilting while you're drawing. Hmm, I don't know how to explain it. I'm sure there are terms for it, but it feels like I want to tilt my head a little when I look at the images. Hope that helps.

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    Nyghtrain: Thanks, one of my goals is to create a child book or something like "The lost thing" by Shaun Tan (Most of the books from my childhood, could be readed by any person besides his age, i like that kind of book).

    Any critic it is welcome, maybe there is a composition term for that, i dont know too. What i can tell you is that im always trying to apply the thirds rule and the only thing i can imagine is the way i use this rule, maybe affects somehow how the viewer sees the picture. Just a hypothesis.

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    Besides i draw everyday on paper, i haven't submitted any of those drawings, mainly because my scanner it is slow enough to make me waste a lot of time that i prefer invest drawing more. Maybe I will post more often my traditional drawings on weekends. But for now this was a drapery and lightning practice with my boxers shorts. lol

    I have problems with materials, this one it is to shinny...maybe soften blending or different brush with texture could improve the fabric look?

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    Messing up with colors 30 min

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    Daily SpitPaint Scary Canyon 30 min ....Used photo reference for the background.


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    I suck at painting skin tones!. I'm addressing that.

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    Trying to practice skin tones...1 hour and half..trying to be faster at painting too

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    Highlights of my sketchbook from last month

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    Some from life


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