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    another knight/scary castle/WIP..OPINIONS?

    just wanting to hear some opinions on how this wip is going so far.....

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    Already looks nice to me.
    Don't make the horse too small though.

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    Hey gragg really nic concept for the peice i did a paintover just to show my POV .... (srry abt the horse my animal anatomy really sucks) i just enlarged the image and pushed off some of the values

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    Ahnem Mee- Thanks! ill work with the size of the horse, ive had problems with that in the past..

    giby- Ok now your just showing off! lol! I like yours a little better, might have to tweak mine a bit

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    Scene clarity

    nice art

    just a post to say that showing the horse

    cut off at the legs ..it makes your drawing sink a little

    the eye goes down to the horse..and falls off the page..

    the veritical castle stops at the rim of the foreground

    draw the knight and horse complete to give a strong forground

    image and then the eye moves to the castle

    best wishes

    p.s. a visual sketch for my unclear ramblings

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    kliest- ugh, you guys are just making me look bad, lol, awesome sketch, great advice!

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    any better?.......

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    Well I kind of liked the first one better - there was some great overlap in the different elements that I liked.

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