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    repair destroyer... any ideas please....

    this is a rather early stage. just want to hear some feedbacks.

    please comment on anything...


    thanks a lot guy

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    I would raise the planet in the background to make it more obvious. The lighting is non existent and the textures for all the surfaces are too similar. I know its early but try and get some ideas for the placement of work lights or docking bay lights and the planet would have a huge impact on light in the scene. thumbnails would have helped all these problems by establishing the pattern of value and color before any other information is decided.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dpaint View Post
    I would raise the planet in the background to make it more obvious. The lighting is non existent and the textures for all the surfaces are too similar. I know its early but try and get some ideas for the placement of work lights or docking bay lights and the planet would have a huge impact on light in the scene. thumbnails would have helped all these problems by establishing the pattern of value and color before any other information is decided.
    the tone is definitely to be reestablished, thanks a lot man.

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