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August 11th, 2012 #1
New Lineup, with more wierdos on the way.
Been working on this on and off for a bit, I'm still gonna probably change a few things soon (like Joplin's clothing, dude looks like a valet or card dealer or something).
And as you can see I haven't finished Django, yet, but it's good to get some input on what I have so far, seeing how everyone else is "done".
Oh, I can tell you right now that the lighting is inconsistent and basically a grab bag.
Been working on this here and there.
Ok, might give a go at explaining what I'm thinking here.
The bottom line is that I'm thinking of taking a 1930's cartoon backdrop (particularly the works of Fleischer and Mintz) and twist it into the vein of a shonen comic. But not just any shonen, Jump-style shonen, REAL shonen: Friendship (友情), Endeavor/Struggle (努力),Victory (勝利). Really goofy, huh?
The story takes place in Great Depression Chicago, about a bunch of inexplicably battle suited weirdos who get mixed up with the Mafia, and subsequently an underground anarchist cult that plotted the murder of the mayor.
I'm still going in the way of research, and I've got a ways to go. But it's fun, I tell ya.
I'm just looking for some critique on my character designs. Are they distinguished well enough from each other? Do they all look like they belong in the same world, particularly Vet? It's not easy making a single human in a group of funny animals not stand out too much. Do some ideas just not work at all? Artie's torso could be a problem.
And if anyone didn't catch the joke, all of the characters are named after musicians (except Eddie) and Joplin's an anachronism in two ways.
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August 11th, 2012 #2Registered User
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These are really awesome. I love your style.
One thing I noticed is that Vet's left leg seems shorter than the other.
I don't want to call this an inconsistency, but one thing that I noticed is that some characters seem slicker than the others. Artie and Calloway have very few details, and seem very geometric, whereas Vet and Eddie look very wrinkly and kind of floppy in comparison.
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August 11th, 2012 #3
I have to agree with snacks about the "floppyness" and what really got me was that I originally thought that Vet looked way too "real" for a "toon" but then I read the description and she's supposed to be like a "REAL real" human? I'm just having a hard time figuring out if this is a Roger Rabbit type of scenario that she's real but just stylized (what with the lack of gloves too), or is she too supposed to be like a "human toon" like Betty Boop?
Also what bother's me is that though overall most real, her feet are small compared to her hands (like Pat's but less cartoony) so I might look into that too, especially if she's supposed to be overall realer or a more stable character in personality.
With Artie the lack of visible clothing cues on the arms kinda bother me as they also kinda jump to a step more real anatomy too. It does kinda make an interesting contrast between the "geek" shirt and the bruiser arms (as in as opposed if the outlines of the arms were round too, making him look more gentle) but personally I'd add something, like another stripe to the sleeves to connect the arms with the shirt body stripe or a button to the wrist or something.
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August 11th, 2012 #5
Overall I think it's safer to, as snacks mentioned, make her clothes more geometric and less detailed, the more real folds of the dress is what caught my eye the most with her.
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woah. okay. I love these characters very much. Sorry to be complimenting so much hah this is a critique zone after all. I think the character that is the weakest would be Vet, she should be a more Fleischer centric character, since she kind of looks out of place. Try a different eye form, something more exaggerated. But still. what a great line up! Mind if I ask what program did you do this in?
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I think the mouths falling off the face are a bit annoying, because they seem like the only thing on the character that isn't affected by the structure of the character. You go to all these lengths to show that there's3D legs inside the 3D shoes and then you have glue-on mouths. Bleah.
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August 15th, 2012 #11
Quick edit of Vet, less frills and bigger feet. The display on the monitor I'm using right now is giving me some trouble, so the values might not look right. Just so you know.
What do you think? Better?
I'm redoing Artie and Joplin's clothes as we speak. Found some things in one of the fashion books I bought that might work for them.
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As always, just my two cents.
August 15th, 2012 #13
Here they are, plus an updated Eddie.
...I went overboard on Artie, didn't I?
Bah, I REALLY need to hurry up and draw Django. Wanna know something confusing? Parrot's feet. How the hell do those back toes work? They look broken!
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