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    + jinny's sketchbook + Comment & Critique Please!

    I just recently joined CA after browsing through the forums and finding it so inspiring. It's kind of intimidating with all of the amazing artists on this site, but it's also motivating, and I'd love some crit/advice.
    I'm 19 and interested in doing 2D animation and possibly even character design.

    I'll post some of my work from earlier this year first and work up to my sketches from today. The sketches before the figure drawing were done in May or a little bit before, and the figure drawing done in mid May.
    The ones after that were all from June and after.
    My next post will be really recent work!
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    Observational studies I made yesterday from Bridgman and other things.
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    ...And my last post for today. Digital painting is definitely something I still struggle to understand, so I made these studies (ref'ed from The Drawing Script) early this morning.

    Please crit or give any advice you have. I know I have a ton to improve on!
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    Sorry I don't have much in the way of crit, I just wanted to say I love the playful air that emanates from your work.
    Check out my sketchbook! Socially acceptable opportunity to yell at a teenage girl!
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    Really liking your cartoony style already. I think with better understanding of form you'll improve upon those very quickly. I'm looking forward to seeing that.
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    Studies from Loomis' book plus some figure drawings ref'd from The Drawing Script. Need to do way more of these. Crit me!
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    These were more for fun, from imagination. Quick stuff.
    I love sharks and their pudgy noses.
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    wow, great drawings! Like the movement in your gestures. You will make a great animator
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    Thanks for the comments!

    Here's some more. I really need to work on form + perspective.
    I think tonight I'll go back to Bridgman's construction techniques. C&C please!
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    WIP portrait study from The Drawing Script. Need to work on my blending... Crit me!
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    Theres good movement in your sketches, I like the sharks, this last painting looks a bit muddy.
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    love the movement and the liveliness of your sketches and gestures

    the last painting looks a bit chaotic, as if your brush went all over the place. maybe try using a larger, softer brush at first to lay down colours and shades and then detail that?

    love your work, MOAR.
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    Thanks Mr-Joe and nodeerskulls, I'll work on that painting. I think the brush I was using had a weird setting and made everything splotchy. I'll fix that!

    More posts to come!
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