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    Hi!
    This is my latest work (around 3 hours in) and would be very happy to hear what you have to say about it!
    Don't really know how to proceed, so any help will be appreciated!

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    Some changes. Better or worse?

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheIceHeLater View Post
    Some changes. Better or worse?
    Worse to me, adding the contrast to the background destroyed some of the depth and distance of the previous image, as well as not the mountains are starting to hog attention away from the figure, and overall it became kinda eye-burny and un-serene (which I think you were going for, what with the meditating guy and all?).

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    Thanks for the comment!
    When I made the changes I thougt the lighting was too flat and a bit uninteresting. But I definately understand what you mean! I'll see what I can do to fix it.

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    Better, or do I need to make a more drastic change?

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    Some minor adjustments. A friend gave me some crits about some of the objects angles, so I corrected that. Will continue tomorrow, so if anyone have crits, I'd love to hear them!
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    Minor update today

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