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    Icon Woman with Mecha

    Hi everyone ;
    I started new scifi concept works a few days a go. The concept main think is the woman who stand with her mechas after the mecha arena fight. This mecha is not kind of space type. More like brutal arena fight mecha. And that woman suit is made by vinyl.
    I'm stiil work o this concept. Add these details next days
    * Some grease effect on mecha
    * More light effects inside of mecha
    * color light effects on vinyl suit
    * neon Score panel top side and light effects

    I'm open and waiting all critics & comments.

    See you

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    Resize the images, all of them are ridiculously large.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TinyBird View Post
    Resize the images, all of them are ridiculously large.
    Ok =)

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    Are you using references for the woman on the mecha?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Artimatum View Post
    Are you using references for the woman on the mecha?
    Yes I used. I will add my reference photos tonight.

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    OK,another question.

    What is going with the legs and,is a position like that even possible?
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    A list of things I saw...

    The composition is to centered for my tastes.

    The rim of the cockpit she is sitting on isn't symmetrical.

    There are anatomy issues with her pelvis and leg, it looks like her right femur is broken to get in that pose.

    She has no neck. You have strong lighting from the right side of the image but her left boob is lit from the other direction.

    In the bottom left corner of the image, you have some paneling on the wall that isn't symmetrical.

    The thing with the yellow arrows on the mechs left arm form a tangent with a panel line on the wall. (vertically)

    Hope these help you out.
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    Quote Originally Posted by scrt_AgentMan View Post
    The rim of the cockpit she is sitting on isn't symmetrical.

    Actually symmetrical. Because mech left and Right side is mirror. But position of the pilot broken the symmetry

    There are anatomy issues with her pelvis and leg, it looks like her right femur is broken to get in that pose.

    I used a photo for legs and body forms. I checked twice later.

    She has no neck. You have strong lighting from the right side of the image but her left boob is lit from the other direction.

    Good point. I changed

    In the bottom left corner of the image, you have some paneling on the wall that isn't symmetrical.


    The thing with the yellow arrows on the mechs left arm form a tangent with a panel line on the wall. (vertically)
    Thanks for all kind comments

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    This is my reference panel

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    little update


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    The knee and lower leg on the left still looks awkward.
    Should be more shadows. Your main lightsources are coming in from the right upper corner and top center but it isn't consistent. Not to mention the lightsources coming from her back, lower left,...

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