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    Completed yesterday oil on canvas.. critiques welcome (moved from FF)

    Hi,

    I been doing this oil on canvas since a week, well not effectively full week, I spend time during evening after office and early morning. Feel free to pass comments,suggestions, bad remarks, anger , envy etc etc..
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    That background is really cartoony and bare compared to the girl. The girl has problems too but... that background. It's just couple blocks of blue and brown.
    Was this piece really finished?
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    I'd take another look at the lips, they don't seem to be lining up with the other facial features and aren't following the turn of the head.

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