lets showcase here animation work and motion graphics work by students, they have already got feedback from the teachers and jurors or are about to get it, lets discuss and criticize their work here.....hoping to see your film here
The art was a bit too cartoonish and showed no skill at all; it all looks like you used the shape tools for your graphics and didn't even touch the brush tool at all.
While i agree the animation probably could have been better if there was more shape change or even more dramatic/obvious change in shape, I dont agree with saying that their work "showed no skill at all". That line is just uncalled for and doesn't help him/her at all. Also "too cartoonish" sounds more like a personal opinion rather then helpful critique.
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