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    yeah dont really like the outcome ... but i will just have too follow it trough and do as much as i can on it!


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    COW 267 Belestial

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    Critiques and advise are always appreciated.

    This once proud xenophobic species of the beholder kin hunted its brethren relentlessly. The pursued kin cursed and banished them in retaliation causing this xenophobe to survive in the recesses of space. Undergoing immense evolutionary change from biochemical to bio-energy the species developed technologically as well. They now encase themselves in runed symbolic housing reminiscing of their forming selves. They not only changed physically but culturally as well. The vast and drastic changes have rendered them passionate and empathic to other species and are now known as the Belestials.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Eddy Montana View Post
    I really like your design, looks more like a creature from a J-RPG but still, the concept is great.
    Thank you very much Eddy
    lmaooo yes yes, i do love Breath of Fire , FF7. It does totally look like that I think its the stylization of my line work. Now that it is partially painted it should look less stylized and whatnot. I have to stop doing that y'know.. drawing in the same style over and over.. tryin new things and whatnot.

    I like your Beholder a lot, nice touch with the armor and chains. It is dynamic, but I'd love to see an updated WIP before I try any crit. I really think it is solid so far.

    Quote Originally Posted by Oskar! View Post
    Sporus love those concepts man!

    Celestial beholder, healer of worlds.

    This is what've got so far: a giant floating space-eye, with eyes on it's head and eyes on his tentacles. He uses his magic eyes to restore life on dead planets.

    No clue if there is enough angelic or celestial though :/

    Thank you so much Oskar! !

    I like yours alot so far! it has real potential, the scale could be emphasized more with objects in the back or foreground.
    I see what you mean about the angelic celestial thing... maybe try adding like design (beholder tattoos) something angular and euclidean, crosses for biblical ... idk for celestial... some kind of cosmic tribal thing.
    keep at it

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    So developing it further.. taking a break to upload. I think I've emphasized the creature part more... hope I'm not losing the topic anywhere... Made the eye more human like to stick to the old D&D beholder look instead of my style.. Made the wings more like Eagle wings instead of like Card Captor Sakura type xD
    Trying to give it the flailing eyes stalks to again, stick to the classic reptilian beholder.

    Working on eye beams and anti magic fields will have to wait til the end...
    noticed later I gathered inspiration from Safer and Bizarro Sephiroth:

    C.O.W. #268. D&D Variants: Round 1: Celestial Beholder - WIPs ThreadC.O.W. #268. D&D Variants: Round 1: Celestial Beholder - WIPs Thread
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    total J-RPG ... xDDD This is awesome too but too big to post.
    I looooooovvveee these Sephiroth form concepts To deathh.. love love love.. I remember watching my brother play when I was 5 or 7... FF7 totally shapes my art and style... completely

    will definitely have celestial beings flying around and interweaving flight patterns in the wings and eye stalks to show scale and whose side its on.

    Concept tid bit: The classic beholder is the bane of D&D players. They're absolutely wretched to fight and impossible to sneak by

    C.O.W. #268. D&D Variants: Round 1: Celestial Beholder - WIPs Thread (beholder from Futurama)
    Yes beholders are also the most anal of beurocrats!!! what could be more terrifying!!!

    So if I'm understanding the topic/brief correctly
    "going to turn around that whole “evil” thing; in the world of Dungeons & Dragons, celestial beings functions as purveyors of benevolence and angelic principles."
    The anti-beholder would be a TOTAL bane for bad guys e.g. Dark Wizards Dark Elves etc.
    There would not be many Celestial beholders floating around, they'd be rare beings and completely solitary, nowhere near the power of a Golden Dragon but 2 tiers lower than the level of the lower Metallic Dragons.

    If I had to name it I'd name it ...

    Goy-J'yark-Xekt the Nutrix Stellarum

    google translate tells me "Nutrix stellarum" is latin for "Nurse of the stars" haha i always use Google translate for naming...
    Even though I took 2 years of honors latin in high school i have no idea if that is correct xD

    time to get back to work...
    thank you in advance for crit and compliments!! and good luck to all

    last thing I did C.O.W. #268. D&D Variants: Round 1: Celestial Beholder - WIPs Thread
    more recent than the last image in the attachment's manager below, just didn't wanna make another whole post for another image.... wish I could consolidate everything I've posted here into one.... I may do that for my SB
    any crit appreciated.
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    Oskar!, i like the idea of an gigantic beholder who heals the tiny planet, but i think he looks like he is about to eat it.
    Maybe it´s the expression on his face making me think that? Dont know!

    I have put some more hours in my picture. It will probably stay like this, because i will not be able to work on it until the deadline.

    The Celestial Beholder is a creature which is rarely found.
    Some adventurers tell stories of Celestial Beholders guiding them trough
    dark dungeons deep below the surface when they ran out of torches.
    They say once a Celestial Beholder touched you with his hand, you can see in the dark.
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    hmm good idea I was thinking more of a faberge egg style to the beholder concept question can we make eyes not attach to the beholder like floating eyes or not?
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    bah! wish I'd seen this topic sooner, I love beholders! awesome wips everyone!

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    I went a tad away from an "eyeball" type eye. This is god's vessel that descend along with angels to purify the world of evil. The center of the creature contains the "eye of god" and the small tentacles above act as the detector of evil energy. The whole vessel radiates with godly aura and protects the rather weak body structure of the vessel. The long tentacles drains the evil energy towards the eye of god for purification. It's like the war tank of the gods that aid the angels in the war between good and evil.

    I might work on it a bit more if i have time during the weekdays~
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    @njoo ...uhhh seeing the badgeC.O.W. #268. D&D Variants: Round 1: Celestial Beholder - WIPs Thread and that..

    really cool design seriously though, awesome artwork love your stuff in it's finally finished

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    njoo love the jellyfish concept you got going on

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    are attachment manager images not showing up for anyone else?

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    It isnt working for me too
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    So many pretty eyeballs! I have a thing for eyeballs.

    PlasmaErnst: Charming sketches and your final is very lovely! Loving the main eye and your description of it.
    Sporus: Wow, you're really putting a lot of work into it. I like that it's become more vivid as you progress.
    njoo: Super cool jellyfish! I'd like to see a more obvious eyeball in there.
    gavinmacdesign: I like that you're going away from an organic creature to something more mechanic riddled with mysteries!
    Emilche: Looking good so far. =)
    Oskar!: I really like the story you gave it. It should come to earth and do something about all this pollution.

    C.O.W. #268. D&D Variants: Round 1: Celestial Beholder - WIPs Thread

    As you can see I'm struggling with the stones, because of layer mishap I have to do them over again! Currently trying to give them shape and experimenting with the colours to get a more gemstone-look. Haven't decided what the final colours it should be yet.

    C&C very welcome!

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    Sporus haha awesome post

    Sunparasite i like your design, but it looks more like "winter" or "ice cream" than "celestial" but it is just my opinion.

    Oskar! I really like it, cant wait to see it finished.

    Edit: i still cant see my attached image hope this wont interfere with the activities.
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    yayy the images are back!

    here's the most recent design/wip
    this is taking me FOREVERRRR

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    Obstfelder Great Lighting!

    I only did some pencil sketches. Had a general idea alrdy, like jellyfish and worm-on-an-orb-thingy.

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    got this post late, what a great topic. So here's a quick sketch, I will definitely have it done by tomorrow night. Nice work from everyone so far.
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    Oohhhh my goodness. I'm super late to the punchbowl here (I always seem to read these on the day or so before the deadline) but as an avid player of D&D I can't resist giving it the old college try. And hey, it's not like I had other things to do tonight.

    Unrelated: A Dr. Seuss-inspired Beholder I made a while back: http://jmcarlyle.tumblr.com/post/864...e-on-a-classic
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    jeez I gotta finish this by 10pm tommorow aggghhhhhh

    any tips for finishing pieces? God my technical knowledge of Photoshop with the filters and snazzy effects is still lacking.... I've hit a roadblock.
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    McJimbo, if you're an avid D&D fan, stick around. There are 2 more rounds of D&D monster redesigns!
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    PontusEuxinus: Thank you!

    Sporus: You don't need that many flashy filters, but adding some color might be good I usually make a layer on top of the grayscale and set it to color so I don't break the grayscale image.

    Here is my second WIP cleaning up a bit more and trying to make it sharper.

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    i'm not late, am i?

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    You guys are awesome!
    Obstfelder, Loving the spiderlike eyes

    throwing some colors on it, and refining some stuff
    Next post will be the final
    C.O.W. #268. D&D Variants: Round 1: Celestial Beholder - WIPs Thread
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    alllll mossssttt therrrreeee D:
    really shouldn't have stopped to post this but my hand needed a break too...

    Oskar thats perfect!!! the additional diamond type things really change its mood and whether or not it is evil.

    gah, i don't expect to win, but man this was fun. I learned it is really not enough or anything to have a decent idea. I need the skills to create what I have in my head. To create exactly what I have imagined takes a lonnng time and in the end it won't ever be exactly that because you change your painting on whims and what looks good there...

    6 or so more hours to go.

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    Managed to finish in time

    Had a lot of fun with it. (and a lot frustration xD) And I learned sooo much
    Special thanks to draconius, for giving me feedback whenever I needed it

    Good luck everyone!
    Sporus, that final effort is going to pay off, already digging the god-like looks of him

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    Quote Originally Posted by Oskar! View Post
    Managed to finish in time

    Had a lot of fun with it. (and a lot frustration xD) And I learned sooo much
    Special thanks to draconius, for giving me feedback whenever I needed it

    Good luck everyone!
    Sporus, that final effort is going to pay off, already digging the god-like looks of him
    yeahhh arent community activities great??

    this is gonna be a close call for me... sooo close to being done...
    only posted this because was taking another break for my hand.

    last one i post in WIP
    hope to join you all in Finals soon lots of great entries can't wait to see the next one.

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    Poll will be going up in a few minutes. If you haven't gotten it in yet, do that now.
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    Sucks! Didn't get to finish it this week, but I'll show what I got done.

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    Damn it! i missed the deadline...
    Well, i will show the picture anyways.
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