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July 18th, 2012 #1
About one third done.
color is the next step.
I have to say, im a little proud of myself.
I have a strong cinematic light source, that give the foreground character a real sense of form that most of work is lacking.
Also no ref for the face! and no ref at all for the big guy.
today i dont totally hate myself. <:
ew just noticed her head is still off. needs more detailing on the glute.
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You need some detailing on the arm, especially the hand since they are closest to the camera yet obviously have less detail than the face and armor.
Background samurai mech seems to have some kind of flame on, wouldn't it give another lightsource?
Also the light source that hits the woman's chest-plate is strong, why doesn't it reach the arm/leg ?
Don't get me wrong I think it looks good overall, just need some fix.
Last edited by LightandDark; July 19th, 2012 at 01:35 AM.
July 19th, 2012 #3
I recognize all of your images instantly Spirit. I see that beautiful asian woman and I'm like thats spirit's work.
I like this one a lot more than images of the past. A lot more. I see some storytelling, and the woman is not an obvious sex object. I assume you'll extend the frame away from the pistol.
I look forward to seeing more of this because I always love your colors.
July 31st, 2012 #4
Sorry about the long long delay. and i forgot to open up the right sidee. Sorry I dont have a long reply. Simultaneously applying for a visa.
July 31st, 2012 #5
I have trouble understanding how her upper body connects to the lower body. Nice work otherwise.