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    Tobys sketchbook

    Hey guys and or females, I am just starting this thread because I need feedback so I can improve on my drawing/painting skills.

    I drew apples everyday for a week to improve my observational painting skills, These are the first and last paintings of the week.
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    Hunger games copy

    I copied a scene from the hunger games film on photoshop, Iv been practising achieving correct colours and realism in a shorter time, so I really would like some feedback on how to improve.
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    Nice colors! It definitely looks like a good start! I would try getting some areas of tight definition to indicate the focal point in each piece while still leaving some loose brushstrokes, which I think you are aiming at doing. Good exercises and keep on!
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    Sherlock

    After getting some feedback, Iv painted a scene from Sherlock Holmes, still trying to do it quickly but with a realistic look, I got some advice to try and add some tight definition to the focal points in each of my paintings, with this is mind I tried to add detail to the eyes of Sherlock. obviously its not the most proportionally correct painting, but Thats what practice is for! Please give any feedback!
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    controller

    Another study of still life, still trying to paint faster but still having realism, Please give feedback, I still need to improve a lot!
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    Schmidt

    Copied from a screenshot, new girl-schmidt, Still trying to achieve realistic colours and proportions in shorter spaces of time, PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK
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    Brother

    Photographed my brother brushing his teeth, still practising digital painting-Trying to draw realistically in shorter spaces of time. Took me about 30 minutes. PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK ON HOW I CAN IMPROVE!
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    Shawna

    This is a vast improvement on my other pieces I think, Still It could be better, My target is still to achieve realism in a shorter space of time. PLEASE GIVE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!
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    Camera

    Camera observational painting, Trying to be quick but accurate, PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK!
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    Sharpener

    Sharpener, Trying to be quick but accurate, PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK ON HOW TO IMPROVE!
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    Summer

    copied from image taken from the 500 days of summer movie. Still trying to be quick but accurate, I NEED TO IMPROVE SO PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK ON BRUSH STROKES, BLENDING ETC!
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    Tom

    Another painting from 500 days of summer, TOM, Man crush activate. Please give feedback on how to improve. This took about 30-45 minutes.
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    nice studies! my advice would be to use more colors (like red and green ) to make the skin more realistic. they also could use more contrast, darker shadows and more highlights, because they look quite flat. If you don´t see this at first, try turning the picture to black&white.
    keep it up!
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