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    Mermaid

    A little mermaid I did applying stuff I learned.

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    The lighting needs to be consistent. Whats your ref for light? Right now it doesn't follow logic. The anatomy in her arms and shoulders needs more definition to be believable.
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    Didn't use any reference, it's all trying to see if I remember things correctly. Thanks for the feedback!
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    Nice job so far! Here are my two cents.

    She doesn't feel like a mermaid yet. I really want to see a tail. I'm sure a tail isn't required, but it sure helps. So far, because there's nothing at the bottom, I could see her having two tails, or a shark fin the goes left to right instead of a fin that goes up and down like mammals do. Unless you want it to be ambiguous and just have her be some sort of sea creature, I would answer that question with a tail.

    I like the coral red on the fins, could you put more of that color in other areas of the piece? Perhaps in the background?

    Keep going, mermaids rock!!
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