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    Boss final touches

    Hey all, getting to the end of this one I hope, its still missing some pezaz...

    Any suggestions welcome, thanks.

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    ATA,

    This has potential I think, but its really lacking clarity. I think the point in his chest is supposed to be the end of his sternum? But its too low.

    The inside of his right leg looks like it has a kneecap so it looks twisted.

    His left hand is impossible to see, and his arms look very different sizes.

    His feet are completely indistinguishable.

    The eye area is unclear. I can't really see an eye. Does he breathe? He has neither mouth nor nostrils.

    There are grey and blue lines around almost his entire figure making him very soft and unclear.

    Overall the whole thing looks pretty scribbly. Try to work in large shapes and planes instead of accidental/random/arbitrary layers of opacity and tiny arbitrary shapes. Try to DESCRIBE the form. and describe this character.
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    Update

    Thanks man, really payes to get a second pair of eyes over your work

    As to your questions Artfix, it would breathe but not through a respiratory system like ours & there are eyes, they are just quite non distinct and more like light measures/receptors, waffle waffle...

    And as for the rendering, I just try my best Very much appreciate you taking time to comment and your comments. Here is my progress though the eve.
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