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    I totally agree with you Pavel. I was trying to get rid of a tangent with the road and the middle guy's head. I realize now I made him way to big and took away the depth of the figures. I also will look into trying to widen the picture again( Zelrik)... Ahh it always feels like Im taking 1 step forward and 2 steps back if you know what I mean

    Thanks J cart. I am going to scale him down slightly and put some rock moving him down a little and ill work on getting him a some more interest.
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    Changed the composition one last time hopefully. Now going to push it farther.
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    I'm constantly drawn to the far left of the image now and off the page, maybe put something there to balance and redirect attention back in? Looking great though, I love your figures.
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    Hey Thanks LJFHutch! I will work on that for sure.
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