Hi there this is still in the fairly early stages. One particular comment I've gotten from a friend are the hands are too big. I'm thinking the curve on the upper part of the hand that's holding the dagger needs to be straightened, and on the other hand where the index finger meets the thumb should have a slight inward point at the very corner. I'm sure there's some general discrepancies as far as the face and anatomy as well and I'd like to hear what you guys think.
The hair and dress/cloth are going to be kind of a throw back to the bicycle cards style of almost surrealism so I'm leaving them flat for now, also considering changing the upside down queen to a skeleton. For some perspective, this piece is just something I'm doing for fun, and possibly as the start of a portfolio intended for me going into a tattoo apprenticeship (if I ever decide to take that path).