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July 1st, 2012 #1
Meteor pandas W.I.P
Just some works l'm on, feel free to offer crit, good or bad, l'd just want to see what directions l can take with them. It wasn't until after l stared at that weird dragon with the big head for a bit that l recognized it as the Hexadragon from ff8, trying to change it to make my own monster currently. The picture of a lion standing is a fanart l did years ago l'm redoing because the original...was bad.
Last edited by Meteor Panda; July 2nd, 2012 at 08:11 AM.
Hide this ad by registering as a memberJuly 2nd, 2012 #2
Well, that's bit more images than probably should if you want detailed crits for all of them (because that's a lot to critique and nobody wants to write a book length crit here so I'd suggest you'd choose couple of those you're ready to really do work on, even start the from the scratch if needed and remove the more incidental images).
However all of these have problems with showing form and are lacking in realistic light/shadow thus making them flat (the grayscale creatures are especially suffering from this, the dragon's wing is completely flat and it's head isn't constructed to the perspective, the six eyed thing's head isn't consistent from both sides and doesn't look to be standing in perspective, the skull-cow-thing is lit randomly and it's really hard to see exactly what shape the skull on its back is due the lighting and construction), perspective and consistency and I'd suggest you work more from real life and get proper refs for everything.
Learn to construct your characters so that you can figure out the lighting better:
originally from here: http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=242114
July 2nd, 2012 #3
alright, l'll just focus with 3 l'm trying to get correct.
July 4th, 2012 #4
worked on the dragon today, l tried bringing out the wings a bit, don't know if it worked.