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    Red face Need critique! Please.

    I started with this piece last sunday. and now i am really lost. I can't see my errors here. I really need your help. So far my mind is going blank right now. I got a feeling this is not yet finished at the same time i can't do much about this anymore.


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    I desperately need help for the hands Need critique! Please.

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    Can you post your reference?


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    Well it seems like you have a strong start here. As for the hands go find some reference and practice. The hands look pretty good so far, but your details at this point are loose. Just keep going and use reference so you don't get off track. And keep at it. It looks like you maybe are beginning to get impatient: don't. If you get frustrated move on to something different and then come back so you can give this the time it needs. Don't rush. Keep going! And start a sketchbook if you don't already have one: it will be helpful.

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    Also look up the thread on how to post a thumbnail on your thread: right now we aren't seeing anything on your thread title: more people will be likely to stop in and help if they can see your thumbnail.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Elwell View Post
    Can you post your reference?
    here it is : Need critique! Please.


    @Klaw: Thanks a lot

    Here's the latest update so far i can manage

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