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Thread: Barf City
June 30th, 2012 #1
Trying to get my art skills on some real levels, criticism welcome
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June 30th, 2012 #3
Hey thanks alot!
July 1st, 2012 #4
July 2nd, 2012 #5
False advertising! I was expecting to see a city full of barf, or maybe a city made of barf. But that's not the case
I think your first pic (with the castle) has a bit too busy a color schema. You've got warms and cools all over the place without a real set plan.
You've got to think about your light source (I'm assuming that's the sun). It's behind the castle, yet the front of the castle (even all the way to the bottom) is brightly lit and very saturated.
The first thing to address IMO would be the actual structure of the castle. I would design that out first in 3 pt perspective and get that looking right... and then start planning the placement of your colors. Overall the schema is too saturated and jumbled right now.
Keep working. There's no barf here... not even barf of the mind
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July 2nd, 2012 #6
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July 6th, 2012 #7
@Sage- I agree, the castle was actually a bit of an after thought and I kind of just blocked it without any initial sketch. Went a bit crazy with the colors but I think that's what I like about it, I'm usually alot more considerate of lighting and perspective in realistic work. Anyways, thanks for the constructive criticism!
@Natalia- Thanks! I know what you mean, I got pretty bored while working on it so I just left it where it was, might come back and refine it later.
July 6th, 2012 #8
My first attempt at a Sargent copy, took me longer than id like to admit and came out kind of blech.
Should I give myself a set amount of time to complete these?
July 6th, 2012 #9
Some drawings from my freshman figure drawing class via a shitty cellphone cam.
Last edited by Ty Dawg; July 7th, 2012 at 04:16 PM.
July 6th, 2012 #10
A few more, realized I should have turned the flash off in the last ones oops
July 6th, 2012 #11
Your color palettes are very lively! Studies are great too
Portfolio (work in progress) : GB Art
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July 7th, 2012 #12
@GDB- Thanks! Your website's awesome!
Last edited by Ty Dawg; July 7th, 2012 at 02:24 PM.
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WOAAAAH!! sweet; the only thing i have a lil problem with is the all over the place colour in some, it can be really jarring at times and my attention span suddenly gets reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally short. what i really wish to see is more detail, or at least just refining some parts a bit. but seriously dude, these own!!
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