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    Character: Xartai, Goddess of Nature

    This is a character I also continually develop. Here you can see the old version as compared to the new. I wanted a beautiful, yet natural female character. All topped with a little originality.

    A Goddess from Old Forest. It is not known where she originated from. At the time of Nature’s creation, she was empowered to protect nature, and nature will protect her. Xartai has always been powerful, and co-exists with the nature of the world. She protects the forest with her incredibly powerful natural arcane arts. Xartai is the most powerful of the Nature Gods.

    Old concept from back in 2002...
    Character: Xartai, Goddess of Nature

    Now, let me know if there is any improvement...I like the new version alot more. I changed from the bow, to a staff made out of vines. The staff will act as an extension to Xartai's powers...striking out, impaling, entangling, and many other possibilities.

    I intend to bring this concept into the 3D realm very soon.

    Anyways, here is the new Xartai, Nature Goddess.
    Character: Xartai, Goddess of Nature

    Really appreciate any C&C!
    Last edited by Rkhon; June 5th, 2004 at 03:31 PM.

    Sketchbook be here...

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    The new concept is better than the old. By the way you have a lot of problems that can solved studying proportions and anatomy. If you want to do a really beautiful girl use some references copying a model of some magazine.

    Freelancer Artist

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    yo sup dude! the idea is great but if you truly want to make her a nature god- she must lose more of her humanity-
    heres some suggestions-
    1. the eyes- make them look commanding
    2. make beauty earthy- not perfect
    3. if you do this in color give her a greenish tint to her skin
    its a great pic man, these or only things i would do

    my sketchbook

    if a mime was crushed by tree in the woods, would anyone care?

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