Hello everyone, thank you for all the awesome comments you've given already on my pathetic works as I am a complete noob.
This is a very new sketch, as you can tell, and almost everything is messed up. I just want to play around with this framework as the composition is diagonal/crossing and I don't know how to make that more pulled-together but still have it be an unusual open piece.
The girl is supposed to be spraying the dog with the super soaker. It's not a bird's eye view but I hope it looks like we are above these characters; I don't know the term for it, but it's a bit of an angle looking down from a treetop or something nearby (or a streetlight). The bike is confusing me with this angle but I'm looking at some refs to get it right.
The "background" will be a black road with a yellow line crossing from the top left to right (another part of the "diagonal" composition). I did it in red pencil and then desaturated that so that is why this line is not visible in the sketch.
Any comments would be appreciated.