Parsakoira, I'm just in love with your entry
Pixeltuner, so freakin' good) But she doesn't look like a human lol. %)
, great style
J8stine - Go rocket boots.
Pixeltuner - That's one slutty lookin' synthetic.
dcyue87 - Nice, clean linework there.
Parsakoira - That's coming along beautifully. I read what Pixeltuner said and I think have to agree that her head is oh so lightly larger in comparison to her upper body.
ChaosTheory - Nice wink. What is the earth-shaped thing suppose to be, btw? Is it a ball or an oddly shaped prop?
I'm calling this done.
Parasakoira: In the name of all things good in art, don't do that crop. It makes the image way to 'contrived'. The open space you had before made stuff breathe and such
And her head is still huge, the jawline goes almost from shoulder to shoulder. She should be pretty much 3 heads wide, you hardly make it to 1,5 or 2. It can work but maybe the eyes should be a bit smaller then. She's a bit Total Recall now :p
Update for today, hope I can get this finished by tomorrow....
I am kind of new to posting so don't feel worthy to give much crits, but am loving the range of styles and ideas though.
Pixeltuner - Always loved your chow entries, this is no exception!
Parsakoira - I wouldn't crop it, looks far more interesting uncropped. Also its been a long time since I seen any of your work, got to take a peek at your sketchbook!
Christoffer - Love the design, especially the chest plate, could use some colour though.
Trying to make the uniform more sci-fi looking, but right now the hands are giving me problems.
So much great stuff going on. And I have been slacking with mine. Gotta get back to work.
Pixeltuner: That shit is crazy. But the good kind. It looks a bit like her arms are growing into her stomach. Maybe sharpen the lines to separate a little?
dcyue87: I like the character, but the spaceship is a little dull. Consider graphic elements maybe?
Parsakoira: She is just as cute as a button. She will hug the aliens to death.
Chaos Theory: Great expression. The cut over the boobs look a little strange, as if her breasts are stuck on to the clothes and not under them. Maybe remove the shadow above them?
Christoffer: The chestpiece is fabulous. I hope she lands safely
J8stine: Nice figure but I miss the spaceship theme. Are you gonna give her a jetpack?
Agent Melon: Great uniform design! The half gloves are very interesting. There is something a little off with the shading on her jaw, it looks like she is jutting it out to her right side. Other than that, very morale inspiring
Uopdating mine: I've done a few anatomy fixes, but it's mostly the same as before. I wanted the dress to look more like silk, but I'm having trouble with the direction of the light. I cant seem to make up my mind if it's directly to the side or slightly in front.
Oh well... bedtime.
ChaosTheory, I really like the face, but I reckon the legs could get smoothed out a little.
Obsfelder, "suck on cold fusion death, you alien scumbags" - hahahaha. Amazing.
Here's mine, I got carried away with the ship, and it's kind of taken over!
Some blogging - http://tomercs.blogspot.com/
Got pretty close to finished but not quite D: A bit more tomorrow and should be done. I'm struggling with the tone on the footwear surfaces in particular and need to throw the pink lighting on properly.
Tomercs. That is simply beautiful.
But you are right. The ship has kind of taken over.
i put this together, think i might make some changes to her legs.
don't know if i'll have time to finish this on time.
second time posting.
Last edited by ptwob; July 6th, 2012 at 01:15 PM.
so I've changed the legs, line work isn't finished and its poorly colored. but i'm going to sleep now
Wholewheat_keyboard: Thank you! At the moment I don't have a CA sketchbook, but I have a DA account at http://buttermonster.deviantart.com
Christoffer: You are right; I do think it would have been better to make the thighs a bit smaller. I left it like this for now, but I will watch for it next time.
I did definitely grab inspiration from Jetsons. I always liked the goofy envisions of the future from the 60's.
I added a ship to resemble something out of an old shoot-em up game.