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    Ordinary Heros (almost finished)

    One last update before finishing it. Any C&C welcome to aid the finished version.

    Ordinary Heros (almost finished)

    Ordinary Heros (almost finished)

    Ordinary Heros (almost finished)

    Ordinary Heros (almost finished)

    Ordinary Heros (almost finished)
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    I like your designs and characters. I think you have made it look way too much like a photoshop piece. The shadows really give it away. Also that one male character on the right seems to have the top of his hair buzzed off, I don't think this was on purpose. Maybe try doing it in Painter, you'll get way different results.
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    sketch- I used mostly Painter for this, and it's not finished. The top of his head is not even close to being finished. In fact, all the characters are not even close to 60% finished.
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    im glad you decided to finish this one, i think i remember waaay back seeing this in progress. sijun i think? cant remember.

    the piece looks great, i kinda want to see some more variation in the shadows and id also like to see something a little less bland in the far background... those mountains just dont seem to fit well in my eyes. if youre already aware of any of that, disregard me

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    Wow I remember when this was just a sketch...

    Yeah I agree with chris.. something else in the background might be nice.. I know you arent done.. but its good to have ideas..

    Also it seems sort of flat.. I dont feel the depth.. yet.. but it will prolly come with more work...

    I think the other thing I see in it... is there is not a lot of color variation.. The lighting is just white... and the shadow is just darker tones.. no blues or green tones in it.. I know it has its anime style to it.. but that was just something I realized.

    keep it up... If I think of any other crits.. Il post em.
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