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    lord_regenschirm is offline Brought up in the ancient arts of mouse-painting :D
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    rad lawnmower interceptor

    hey guys,

    I just finished this piece for our offices' internal weekly challenge and I'm quite fond of some of the details but am still not sure about the overall composition ... especially of the white building in the background ... I really don't have a clue about lighting, I fear ... whatever there is that could be done in order to improve let me hear ya tear it apart if you will
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    When I squinty the big white building is where my eyes go, and that's not the focal point is it? Get the focus on that awesome girl and gore

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    I would add some overall texture to the building to bring down the tone but still try and keep it clean. Maybe even darken the shadows in the overall composition, then add a little more contrast at the focus. highlights to keep the focus on the action. But amazing work! keep on improving and blowing everyone away! I really like your rendering style!

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