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    Need some other pairs of eyes...

    Hey all!
    I'm just working on this picture, but something doesn't seem right... the coloring in certain areas seems very weak to me and I'm not really sure what I should do about it. I could use some input from other people besides myself (since I've been staring at this nonstop for like 2 hours haha)
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    Why is she lurching and half-lidded like she's sleepwalking? Is she possessed?
    Also the lighting is pretty ambiguous, as she looks to be lit from front and side from her face and hood but her side is completely in shadow, and her face is lacking the same form her shoulder has (though the form of the shoulder too looks pretty iffy, like her muscles or scapula aren't contributing anything to the form).
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    I'll refer you to an old thread that may help http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...93#post1009493
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    Quote Originally Posted by TinyBird View Post
    Why is she lurching and half-lidded like she's sleepwalking? Is she possessed?
    Also the lighting is pretty ambiguous, as she looks to be lit from front and side from her face and hood but her side is completely in shadow, and her face is lacking the same form her shoulder has (though the form of the shoulder too looks pretty iffy, like her muscles or scapula aren't contributing anything to the form).
    http://www.shutterstock.com/pic-3867...her-woman.html
    http://www.feldenkraismelbourne.com....ching-arms.jpg
    Haha yeah, I would say she is possessed in a way. I definitely drew the eye half-closed for that purpose!

    Thanks for the links and the input!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jason Rainville View Post
    I'll refer you to an old thread that may help http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...93#post1009493
    Haha, thanks! That's helpful.
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