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    Hey guys! Just popping in real quick here.. squeezed in some time on the Newborn competition.. hope I have time to finish

    I'll drop by all of you guys' SB's asap!

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    Oh.. and a little iteration on the birdies from the last post.. less of 'em, but more rendered: [EDIT] HOLY SIZE Batman!! Resized.. they were... excessive [/EDIT]

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    Crosspost from my Newborn thread.. I'll get back to everyone who's dropped comments in here tonite! Promise!

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    lots of really great stuff here dude!! keep em coming!!
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    Newborn illo is shaping up really sick. I like the B&W version better due to the harder edges in the foreground. Looking forward to seeing how you finish it!

    EDIT: And this was my 600th post! That's a record for me!
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    good stuff man. i could see your improving.. keep up the work. oh and uhh.. wes' wes' yall! haha
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    Not much time gotta bounce, but I'll get back to you guys soon! Thank you so much for dropping in!

    Here's what I got in today on the Newborn piece.

    Cropped, added some people in the wombs receding in the BG and some general noodling.

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    your painting is quite well done. I also enjoy your creatures ^_^

    The only thing i have to say is that your faces need work. Usually when the faces are far away. Most of your closer faces look decent. I myself suck at faces from imagination so ya.

    By faces i just mean the ones from imagination.
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    Hey d-cept, really nice sketchbook ya got goin here I really like the variety of ideas you've got going here, specifically the newborn ones and the sheet of birds from a couple of posts ago. This recent WIP has a really nice depth to it; you've seperated the fore, middle, and backgrounds quite nicely. Definitely progressing well though, curious as to where ya take it.. keep it up!
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    Your pencil stuff is really good and the Newborn WIP looks great. Just an idea: perhaps the Newborn could be paler--he hasn't seen the sun throughout his existence. That could also easily distinguish him from the dark background.

    Have you seen "The Machinist" with Christian Bale? He lost 60+ pounds for the role, your Newborn reminds me of the character: http://unrealitymag.com/wp-content/u...0/stickman.jpg

    Keep it up!
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    Wicked newborn haha 'good mornig' id be like put me back in keep up the goods!
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    Hi, I like the first greyscale version best. It looks darker and creepier. You lost some of that in the later versions.

    And do more studies man!
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    Ey!
    The Newborn wip is looking great.
    I like the colours your using here.

    The blue and red is nice, and the green in the foreground adds just that little extra!
    Good work. And the composition is tight, and there's a great feeling of depth as well.

    Here's a couple of crits:

    The depth of field going on in the foreground is a cool idea, but as it is now it doesn't work for me. The most subtly blurred insect legs are ok, but the blurred pipe seems kinda wrong. I doesn't feel like it's a part of the picture right now in my opinion. I don't really know how you should fix it. Perhaps make the blur less subtle, or study photos with DoF that you find on the internet perhaps, to get more of a feeling of what it looks like.

    Also the anatomy of the guy who is new born is a bit generic.
    I guess people who are "constructed" like this might get a generic kind of anatomy, but I think that if you made him really weak, or really strong, that would bring out more of a dramatic effect. You know.. Weak like in very thin and all ribs and such. Or strong with broader shoulders and more muscles. At the moment he looks pretty thin, but he's got muscle as well, so I'm not really sure what is going on.

    This is last one is really more of a personal opinion than a real crit though.

    Keep up the good work! Looking forward to see this one finished.
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    My57: Glad you like, and thank you for the crit!

    Onir: Thanks! I tried as best I could to get a good seperation, so I'm stoked it worked! Need to do more illustrations.. hehe.. they're fun!

    YihyoungLi: Hey! No.. haven't seen the film.. guess I'm gonna have to now! I heard that he was advised not to go so extreme by a doctor while filming that thing, though... haha.. Thanks for the suggestion on the Newborn

    Spect: Thanks homie! Always in here.. hehe.. YOU RRROOOOCCCKKK

    zelda_geek: Yep.. totally right.. I need to do more studies... I'll pick it up and post soon! Thanks for the crit on the Newborn piece!

    Shin: Damn... you really sat down and thought this one through didn't you? Awesome crit man! Hope everything is good on your side of town Done with that summer gig yet?

    Ok.. So I got so many suggestions from people not only on here, that the grey scale was way more creepy, so I went for a monochromatic with a kicker for the final.. I'm gonna brush up some more on this thing at some point, but this is what I got in as a final for the competition.. Got a new gig as well I moving into a new apartment while doing this, so I was spread a little thin a while there.. haha..

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