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    Please critique

    Hey, I'm relatively new to digital art and I really haven't had any constructive criticism on any of my stuff. I know I need to improve, but I'm not sure where to start. This is my last piece:

    Please critique

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    Not bad. If you want a critique, I'd say: use reference for the next one. It's not like there's anything massively wrong, it's just that everything's kind of slightly off.

    Also, you might want to focus on the narrative here. Who is this woman? Where is she? Who is she aiming at? Right now it all feels rather generic.

    As always, just my two cents.

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    Also I'd think where and how you place your values, right now the lightest part of the skin values is on her butt (which also has most of the value variation) and the darkest on her armpit and her face is left flat with no value variation and the only value is kinda in the middle that calls little attention to itself. What do you want the point of interest to be? The butt or her face? (and if it's the butt then I'd rearrange the composition)
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    Thanks for the feedback! To be honest, I'm not really sure where I was going with this. I'll try to put more thought into my compositions and anatomy.

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