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    First time here!

    Hello!
    So I drew this recently:
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    It's a fanart of the Koi Neopet.
    I got a ton of people at school and at home saying they really liked it, but...
    I dunno. I'm not really feeling it at all. I feel like there is a lot wrong with it, but I'm not sure what. I asked around, and was eventually directed to this site, so, here's hoping someone here can help.
    I'm really sorry if I'm being a bother, I really don't know what I'm doing at all.

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    Hey I am going to red line some stuff for you just give me a second because my tablet is acting up.
    Because I do not want to scale it down because you need full size to see critique.

    Edit: http://i.imgur.com/L8AAn.jpg

    Last edited by Tagachi; June 21st, 2012 at 08:53 PM.
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    Whoa, thank you so much! That's a big help, and I think that will help me make it much, much better. Seriously, I can't thank you enough!

    Edit: Oh, but I should mention something about the hand-fins. I'm drawing a converted Koi, which looks like this:
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    Oh alright I understand.

    Study some human hand anatomy as well as some cartoon hands so you can understand the underlying structure behind them. And you should be good with the hand fin part.

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    So, I've started working on it again, and even though I've hardly done a thing, thanks to you, it already looks much better!
    So thanks again.
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