@tinybird : No ... i have been doing some pose studies ... and wanted to test myself with no reference ... I know that the entire upper part of the body is bigger than it should be ... I tried to foreshorten the arm which would make it look bigger and making him lean forward but ended up making the whole thing bigger ... As for the perspective its my first try at this kind of perspective
Also "some pose studies" is pretty ambiguous. Could you post them in your Sketchbook or something?
You need to rework it with correct perspective. I don't think the current version is salvageable, so start with a new sketch. This kind of scene depends on correct perspective, so it's best to get it right before you begin painting.
If you are not sure how to build a perspective, I recommend Norling's book "Perspective Made Easy".
Yeah now its too late to change ... I m gonna keep practicing and give attention to perspective next time. Thanks guys for all your crits.