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    Unhappy "Tired Guardian" Need Crits and suggestions!

    Last edited by TrundleBee; June 18th, 2012 at 12:39 PM. Reason: bleh
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    all I have are questions; why is she floating? is she jumping? is the demon thing crying? is the demon thing evil? Are they fighting? If they are, why isn't the demon looking angry or trying to stop her? If she's a dwarf why isn't her head and arms larger and longer to make her look like a dwarf and not overweight? Where do those chains go?

    Why oh why can we see her butt crack?

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    I agree with the above comments and would also ask why is she flying into battle or floating into battle reading Jane Austen or whatever and not concentrating on swatting the 200ft tall crying gentleman with the horns and chains?

    In an illustration of this kind the story is everything and you really have to work hard and plan it to enable you to effectively sell that story to your audience, and I am really sorry but it does not come across very clearly at all.

    just my opinion mate ignore it if you feel I'm wrong, I will not be offended in the slightest, and all the best with the image.

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    Feels like the two characters belong in separate pictures.

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    Hey don't delete your picture because you got what you wanted out of the thread. Other people still learn from reading critiques of the work posted in this forum besides the person being directly critiqued.

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    Quote Originally Posted by humboldt squid View Post
    Hey don't delete your picture because you got what you wanted out of the thread. Other people still learn from reading critiques of the work posted in this forum besides the person being directly critiqued.
    Well, seeing how the poster is looking through a thread about deleting accounts they might not care if others benefit from this thread or not...

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