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June 16th, 2012 #1Registered User
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"Tired Guardian" Need Crits and suggestions!
Post edited because there is no delete option. Thank you for your honest critiques.
Last edited by TrundleBee; June 18th, 2012 at 01:39 PM. Reason: bleh
Hide this ad by registering as a memberJune 16th, 2012 #2
all I have are questions; why is she floating? is she jumping? is the demon thing crying? is the demon thing evil? Are they fighting? If they are, why isn't the demon looking angry or trying to stop her? If she's a dwarf why isn't her head and arms larger and longer to make her look like a dwarf and not overweight? Where do those chains go?
Why oh why can we see her butt crack?
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June 18th, 2012 #3
I agree with the above comments and would also ask why is she flying into battle or floating into battle reading Jane Austen or whatever and not concentrating on swatting the 200ft tall crying gentleman with the horns and chains?
In an illustration of this kind the story is everything and you really have to work hard and plan it to enable you to effectively sell that story to your audience, and I am really sorry but it does not come across very clearly at all.
just my opinion mate ignore it if you feel I'm wrong, I will not be offended in the slightest, and all the best with the image.
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June 18th, 2012 #4
Feels like the two characters belong in separate pictures.
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Human beings, who are almost unique in having the ability to learn from the experience of others, are also remarkable for their apparent disinclination to do so."
June 18th, 2012 #5
Hey don't delete your picture because you got what you wanted out of the thread. Other people still learn from reading critiques of the work posted in this forum besides the person being directly critiqued.
June 18th, 2012 #6